Will

While walking through the depths of hell I was confronted by an archangel who foretold forgiveness to come my way. What he didn't know was that I didn't seek redemption, I tread this infernal abyss so that others could live in peace. A victim of circumstances or a righteous decision? No matter, dwelling on this sort of predicament will only lead to self-manipulation. All worth the while if it means harmony is within your reach.

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9inety's picture

given your desire

to write well, believe me you already do!!!

my only suggestion is to read the classics, Shelley, Shakespeare, TS Eliot, Dyaln Thomas, e.e.cummings, the list goes on forever.

check out this folder

http://www.postpoems.org/authors/9inety/folder/900088

maybe try writing some stuff on the lighter side for awhile

stay safe

Peace

Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

ashes_twisted's picture

Sacrificial.

Beautiful poem.
=^.^=


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

joshomac's picture

Thanks, appreciate that :]

Thanks, appreciate that :]


Beyond the scope of light,

Beyond the reach of dark..