"My Broken Box"

As she stands in front of me and holds me, as I hold her.
I crumble to thought of ever losing her.
Her eyes bring on so much pain, so much wicked.
My heart brings on so much love, so much care.
That after I stare for as long as I need to.
The pain that was once there I now bestow in my box "my broken box".
That no one can touch.
No one can break .
No one can hurt her again.
No one can cause her that pain that they made her suffer.
I will take on the pain, I will take on the suffer.
If for a mere second she looks into my eyes to see how much I hold.
To see how much I have hurt.
To see how much I've been thrown away.
Your pain is gone when your with me.
I will hold it all.
"In my broken box".

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lostANGEL's picture

AWW

This is soo very sweet I love it

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Thank you

Thank you so much lostangel! Appreciate the feedback. Check out my other's you may enjoy them as well. This is by far my number 1 fav! :-)


~Jordan~

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Of course poppy I love to

Of course poppy I love to share my thoughts dont you? lol


~Jordan~

ashes_twisted's picture

Elizabeth Gilbert.

Made me think of a quote by Elizabeth Gilbert.

“If I love you, I will carry for you all your pain, I will assume for you all your debts (in every definition of the word). I will protect you from your own insecurity. I will project upon you all sorts of good qualities that you have never cultivated in yourself. I will buy Christmas presents for your entire family.

I will give you the sun and the rain, and if they are not available, I will give you a sun check and a rain check. I will give you all this and more, until I get so exhausted and depleted that the only way I can recover my energy is by becoming infatuated with someone else.”

~ Elizabeth Gilbert

Favorite Lines:
If for a mere second she looks into my eyes to see how much I hold.
To see how much I have hurt.
To see how much I've been thrown away.

In those lines alone I could feel the immense thickness of your pain.
My eyes were so fixated upon your work that it asphyxiated me.

Brilliant.


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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Thank you so much I

Thank you so much I appreciate the feedback! This is one of my favorites :-D


~Jordan~