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I look at you
you look at me
that has no fee
but you stole a heart from me

You look at me I look at you
for godsakes what do I do?
just smile while im blue?

I look at you
you look away
you are a boat, my brain the bay
why do you stay?

You look at me
I look at my shoe
What will it do?
will it moo?
will it coo?

I look away
You're in my mind
that's whhat i find

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last updated 3 November 2011 - 9:39pm
©3 November 2011 - 9:09pm — twisted_soul
17 November 2011 - 8:19am — MatthewWayne
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Very good prose here :) keep

Very good prose here :) keep at it.

"I am my own sort of strange, a supernova of madness and brillance. Forced to share the same space and time. Sane enough to not be seen, yet not crazy enough to be heard." -- Matthew Wayne

17 November 2011 - 9:44pm — twisted_soul
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thank you :)

thank you :)

10 November 2011 - 1:44am — Elfy
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Awwww!!!!!!!!!!! This poem is

Awwww!!!!!!!!!!! This poem is so cute, and so sad. :( Its beautifull though. Good job.

-Elfy*

14 December 2011 - 9:59pm — twisted_soul
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this coment is late yes but

this coment is late yes but this is one of my first poems, my first few were mistakenly thrown away :(