'13 Try Me Again

  

 

An awe of lusty heaven enchants a life foretold

Sounds arose as your body shivers and unfolds

What a pleasing mystery, such a kiss is to blame

Yet succulent moans and bites gesture to tame

"Please ravish my insides for I can take no more!"

Hands guide my head, there is more to explore

My tongue does not cease to taste valuable skin

For it is sacred, a place where sweetness lies within

What a pleasure it is to have ended with alluring lips

 …to smell you, touch you, and taste between...

What a discharge it is, knowing it started with a kiss

 

©David Joel Rodriguez

Author's Notes/Comments: 

oh well...I guess I'll take the criticism... :-(

 

'13 Try Me

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ljmills's picture

Holy moley! Too hot to

Holy moley!

Too hot to handle.

I definitely need my friend after that.

You are deliciously erotic Mr R. 

Joel's picture

Not everyone understood part

Not everyone understood part 1 and 2. These two strange writings were not about "a kiss"...they were about the "lips."


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"You think Einstein walked around thinking everyone was a bunch of dumb-shits?"

Joel's picture

It's my Fault though, I'm

It's my Fault though, I'm Phraseless and have a bad habit of speaking in riddles... :-(


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"You think Einstein walked around thinking everyone was a bunch of dumb-shits?"