'10 Just Weeds in a Garden

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2010

Just Weeds in a Garden

You'd pluck pluck pluck
Like our life you sucked
Wore us down to the nub
Like a hopeless rose bud
That book was my heart
that which you tore apart
Like a rose in your hand
you are about to disband

 

© David Joel Rodriguez

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heatherburns35's picture

just weeds in a garden

that book was my heart
that which you tore apart.

take better care of your heart...
Don't offer it so quickly...
nice poem.  heather

Transplendent Experience's picture

So - you are feeling not so great lately huh?