Young and Dumb

If all u can do is accuse me try to use me and verbally abuse me
Then I gotta a lot of sense I'm getting up please excuse me
I want u in the worst way but time is thin these days I know it sucks
I know time is money but if I'm not spending one u think I should spend the other just to fuck
Yeah right ... But you're right and so I will take my business elsewhere
U complained about constraints but I was building something else here
I thought it was for me and u I thought I could take u but I guess u missed the bus
I gave u all the time that I had to offer explained the plan but all u did was fuss
I thought u would be able to learn the things I was trying to teach u fast
But u missed a lot of the lesson and got tutored by some dropout's ig'nat ass
I thought that ur youth would play a factor but I thought it'd be a plus
But its a minus cause ur a negative and I guess that's it for us

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Juggalette....MCL's picture

another very well written

another very well written piece...i really like the last part of it being a plus but its a minus cuz she is a negative i love it.....it works well together and makes sense!!!!! u have a very different style of writing...i dont see it often but i enjoy it!!!! keep up the good work!!!!