Hosanna, 1: At Gethsemane, By Night

We, in the Temple Guards, came out against him,
as one goes out to catch a sneaking thief.
They wanted him because he raised a dead man
to life, and brought the priests and scribes to grief.

Our sharpened swords were gleaming in the torchlight,
as we marched, full force, to Gethsemane.
I wondered why the priests should be so frightened
of this one man, who came from Galilee.

We, too, had heard of miracles he did there.
We watched him ride into Jerusalem.
We listen to him teaching in the Temple.
We wondered what those priests found to condemn.

He waited for us, in that silent garden,
almost as if we came at his command.
Some, in the front, spoke to him.  When he answered,
we fell---as if shoved by a ghostly hand.

He watched us patiently while we stood back up,
more startled than we would admit (I know).
His craven friends clung, shaking, to each other.
He said, "If ye seek me, then let these go."

Upright, he walked among us like a ruler.
He never once let on a trace of fright.
I thought, then---I was walking right beside him---
'The priests and scribes have their hands full tonight.'

We heard the trial:  the priests and scribes were shouting
until their lips foamed and they lost their breath.
He never raised his voice, nor did he flinch when
those Romans later scourged him half to death.

He had a bearing I have never witnessed
in anyone.  His courage did not mesh
with common sense, nor did it fail him even
as they drove nails, that morning, through his flesh.

I, too, walked out to Golgotha to see how
it ended.  Hanging from that Roman beam,
he was quite different from the fools there with him:
he never once let out a wail or scream.

And all the while, the blood poured from him, streaming
down to the ground.  Six long hours---a short span
for most---and then he died, so badly battered,
by then, he did not look much like a man.

The priest and scribes cackled with satisfaction
as Joseph (prince in Israel) took him down,
and buried him nearby.  But, two days later,
the news roared just like thunder through the town:

THE TOMB WAS EMPTY!, truly, wholly empty,
no matter what spin priests and scribes could rig.
I told myself, 'All History has changed now . . .

'and this day is the start of something big.' 

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Alison Sailer's picture

oooo how graphic! very emotional... exactly the effect we should get everytime we read about Christ's death.
~alison

Judy Costea's picture

Jere'
I could never make it through reading about his death without choking back tears... This piece you have written gives me chills. for you desribe it so well how he was put to death... How he didn't even flinch when those nails pierced his body.. Then after 2 days, of how the news roared like Thunder through town... (Thunder) I like that...
Very well written and desribed..
Thanks for sharing this
Peace and Love