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Soul Kiss

Let me taste your soul with this kiss

Try to see if it's really warm like I imagined it

Just this once, will you hold me please

And let me feel your breath with these lips.



Kiss me sweetly like you would in a dream

The moment is so fragile it could disappear

Fluttering and nibbling like butterfly wings

The playful play of hearts that are wishing.



Kiss me with all the passion that you have

Tell me with your lips how much you need me

To never get enough with each breathless sigh

That this duel of fire may burn me with longing.



It really doesn't matter how you kiss me

But please do it with all your heart, sincerely

It may be now, or maybe not exactly, so till then

I'll hold my breath until that soul kiss moment.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i think i'll define it as a sweet slow kiss, with the whisper-soft exchange of breaths that melts the heart and every bone in the body. ^_^

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 6:53pm
©4 February 2006 - 10:42am — jaela
6 February 2006 - 10:28pm — Laura Maguire (not verified)
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Thanks for critiquing my stuff.I like the title to this one,and it's nicely written.My fave lines are "Fluttering and nibbling like butterfly wings
The playful play of hearts that are wishing."--that's cool,conjures up pretty images in the mind :-)and I love that playful play bit.I think you've managed to do well with this type of poem,usually they end up being too soppy,so well done.Keep it up,I've read alot of your stuff and you have bucket-loads of talent!