Indisputable women

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Dispair

Melting,
Blood sucking Demon's
Permeating my skin.
Not completely draining
But taking enough to hypnotize my brain.
For a moment I have forgotten
Who I am
But instantly I'm back at it again.
Take me for granted
Use me till you need me no more,
There is always another sucker
Out there waiting to be torn.
We are all the same
With the same fucking goals,
Looking to buy happiness
With the cost of our sole.
Can't give up everything
As we seep back to our old ways.
We're not just men
Waiting to be played,
For we invented the game
We just made more mistakes.
Now you run like you own it
But your rules are totally fake,
We understand that we can change
But that's the biggest fear in ourselves is that we are whiling not to make.
So why not just be yourself
And see how it goes
I know I'm down for less acting
And more for putting on shows.
Stop allowing us to label you as
Indisputable &$%#

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Cause the begging is do genuine and then once they have you they think they can make that change... And we fall right back into.... Well!!! Where you are right in this very moment. For all you guys out there that are living in this moment

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SSmoothie's picture

Very good! A few quieries

Very good! A few quieries though, is permitting a typo? And is it supposed to be blood sucking demons or diamonds / piercing or permeating? A few typos but man this is cannon fire!;D nice job!  Oh and... I do not permit anyone to label me as a whore! Thanks SS 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Irockpoker's picture

Thank u for the corrections

Thank u for the corrections when I write I sit down and just go and a situation or something I see triggers my mind at that moment to write so most of the time it's the first draft... And my mind is saying one thing bad I'm spelling another... always greatful for ur thoughts and corrections


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SSmoothie's picture

I'm totally the same! 90%

I'm totally the same! 90% drafts unrefined inspirations eventually ill go back and fix. Perhaps when I retire 20 years from now lol!  :D still great work! I enjoyed it. good message! Cheers s s 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am