More than a mate



The verse I write at any rate

I know not what will be its fate

The meaning that is in my mind

Have I been able to relate?

The sole experience I have gained

If I can ever inculcate

The message of faith, love and peace

If I can ever stimulate



I do not like my inward truth

To be discussed like a debate

The poet's heart is like a flower

So tender and so delicate

But anyhow, I need response

For which I can no longer wait

The words of appreciation

Do give my blood a rush of weight

Hi, good reader, I thank you

You look so learned and literate

Sweetish notes of music are

The words like 'outstanding' and 'great'

To think so highly of my verse

You are so kind, considerate



The sun of hope and confidence

Within my soul you radiate

The warmest gratitude I owe

To you, so friendly, intimate

Your approval is a wealth for me

To me you are more than a mate

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Miranda Rae's picture

Iqbal, This poem eloquently states what everyone here on PostPoems feels whenever one of their works is critiqued. And so you can hear a whole symphony, I'll tell you I found this poem to be outstanding, great, gorgeous, eloquent, beautiful, well-written, excellent....... :) Thanks for sharing.