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Close My Eyes
i fight this urge
to be taken away
to give in to this calling
something
someone
wants to take me away
bring me to a land
where i can do anything i wish
feel anything i want
where anything can happen
but nothing is real
where touch isn't felt
and words aren't spoke
it can be a beautiful place
flowers with wide open space
or a land of horror
smoke flames sorrow
a place where often you appear
and make my wishes come true
a place I often hope I'm in
when you are there at the same time
this world
I hope we exist in together
this place where we don't really know another
I'll barely remember
a place I long to go
but still I fight
why do I fight
let me go now
now I shall go
and I'll be on my way
once I close my eyes...
truthfully, i came here because you look hott in that picture..but im glad i came......this is a really powerfull poem, sometimes we all feel like we need to get away and go to a place where everything could be perfect for even the shortest amount of time....and the thought of that place can give you such a good feeling....although that may not be what you were trying to get at in this write...that's what i got out of it....and its so true.....i love it....you're an awsome wrtiter....
goodbye forever,
steve