Smokeshow

sigh deeply enough 

when I ask if you love me 

take me into your lungs 

expel me 

in perfect o’s 

symmetry in smoke

rings like your name in my ears 

and stings like cherry burns

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patriciajj's picture

Amazing description of almost

Amazing description of almost unbearable passion and a longing for love to be returned in kind. Brilliant and explosive work.

1SP's picture

1SP

This is somewhat fun to read, picturing the rings of smoke as I blow in your face... so sexy of me.Cool #KeepPosting