Spooked (CDs)

 

You call me ghost 

when you asked for your cds back

I  buried them and it felt like

Putting my hands over my ears 

our love was in 3 minute intervals 

you were good at

romanticizing ugly things 

I like bottles you can see through

I came home to a surprise party 

Every night 

I wondered who would attend 

It was just you 

I kissed you right between the eyes

you didn’t  see me 

you just asked for your cds

6 years later

you saw me in Mary’s arms 

 

You looked like you’d seen a ghost


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patriciajj's picture

You have a rare talent. You

You have a rare talent. You brilliantly expressed the feelings associated with this relationship, and left us with a satisfying twist at the end. Love it.

Stephen's picture

Insanity

A relationship with a person who dissociates heavily is insane. --- Stephen

Incompl's picture

truly 

truly 


Let your teeth show

life_used_to_be_lifelike's picture

Bravo my dear!!    This is

Bravo my dear!! 

 

This is suberb. 


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

Incompl's picture

xx

xx


Let your teeth show