Creator or created?

He screams for mercy

"I can't take no more pain"

"But you came here for wisdom

And that you shall gain"


"Please take me back

Ive had enough

This world is dark and torturous

These people are so rough"


"You will be home soon enough

This journey is a must 

Keep your heart open

And dont lose your trust"


"I don't know what to do

Can you give me a clue?"

"Follow your heart it will

lead you to truth"


"You speak in such cryptic

I don't understand?"

"Well you can't live for yourself

If you live under command."


"Maybe your not real,

Maybe your not there,

I just needed to make sense

Of all that is unfair."

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Unfinished. 

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millyardo's picture

i like it, let me know when

i like it, let me know when you finish

TheShadowKnows's picture

Different

I've never seen anything like this done before but you do it very well. Clever way to ryhme I like it!