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They found each other,
Through the pain of their past,
But a love this broken,
Surely can't last.
Born into broken families,
Sourcing love externally,
Showing care paternally,
Escaping life internally.
Disconnected from the rest,
Alienation at it's best,
Created comfort in their nest,
Until they confessed,
This union was a test.
But he left her a mess,
She tears off her dress,
She can't cope with the stress,
Or the pain in her chest,
Her heart needs a rest.
So she grabs the rope,
Without him she can't cope,
He was the source of her hope,
This goodbye letter,
She wrote.
i like it, it could really
i like it, it could really stay as is
It reads just fine to me. I
It reads just fine to me. I enjoyed it...
What corrective critisism!!!
What corrective critisism!!! unfinished yes. but I cant wait for the finale!!! though I like it pretty much as is! great rhymes they flow so easily and seem effortless! the best kind of poetry rhyming poetry there is bar a few other styles I am in love with! keep up the great work I cant wait to read more!
ps. sad and painful story, cut the strings let them tangle up with you again if they will but till then, a new hope always lives beside you some times you have to look to the right and ignore what is left. ;) hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
Thank you Ssmoothie. I'm glad
Thank you Ssmoothie.
I'm glad you enjoyed this.
It is sad, but it was beautiful whilst
it lasted and I guess in the end
thats all we can ask for:)
Thanks for reading!