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Nothing
I want nothing from you
which is all I can expect
from an individual
who seeks anger to collect
Take away your false truths
and begin to select
jars of sympathy
and barrels of respect
Or continue to measure
every flaw and defect
Controlling my direction
Owning me only to correct
It will not occur again,
for the last time I checked,
I saw myself alone
completely bruised and wrecked
Firstly i would like to note this preticular rhyme scheme. I noted alot of your works have them as well, but this was the best of them, as for rhymes i am concerned. Also, superb closure. Thank you for it. Cant wait to read more.
Could you get a chance to check out some of my stuff, as it is not yet all critiqued and i would like to hear some.
Thanks! John S