Sunday 12:20 A.M.

The sheep is blind,

Yet with clumsy hoofs

Picks up his eyes,

Understanding the vision

He looks for his shepard,

Lost in his stupidity

He turns to weeping,

In his circle and confusion

The shepard sought him out,

And carries him back to safety

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bad sheep, bad! yes you are so right. Sheep are unintelligent creatures. However, symbolically they represent man according to Jesus. I don't think this is what you were going for when you wrote it, but the title lead me to believe you are taling about church at 12:20 am on sunday. You wouldn't be at church at this time, but that was my first time. You described them very well and the shepherd. oh I still go back to people and Jesus in this poem. It won't leave my head.