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GARDENS SEASON OF DREAMS
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MY FAVORITE POEMS OH.!
you tiny
drop of dew
dampen its thirsty flowers
gently.
A
lovely face
in my memory
as delicate as a
doll.
Hair
so soft
to the touch
more smooth than finest
silk.
Eyes
so green
deep jade like
finest emeralds they would
fade.
When
you came
my blood danced
rivers of hot desires
flowed.
You
became my
body, face, death
my carnival of loving
words.
Be
a rain
falling gently in
the night of my
sleep.
You
will hear
my heart beats
calling out your lovely
name.
Leave
your hair
rest on my
chest, while you fall
asleep.
You
are my
home of love
the sparrow of my
dreams.
So
inhabit me
full of eagerness
I am the knight
seeking.
HAMEED ALQAED
HEATHER BURNS
hi you asked me to comment on this piece so I printed and each one I numbered so I will write the number and my view here 1 for first one so forth:
1-a light watering to sooth the thirst of flowers nicely put
2-faces in memory delicate as doll reminds me of children growing up
3-hair smooth as silk could be child or guy you love in first embrace and kiss
4-eves so green reminds me of when Steve and I were dating he has green eyes
5-blod daced on rivers of desire -that reminds me of every time being with my John
6-this one also how our love of our life inspires us in so many words
7-rain in gentle night of sleep not sure on this one because rainy nights keep me awake
8-this one yeah reminds of all thoughts of John when he is not here
9-this one is something John would say to me
10-this reminds me of how much I love John and he loves me
11-sounds like something John might say to me
** I liked all of these because they touch the heart..
your comments
thanks sweet Ruth for all your lovely comments on the above poem.
I appreciate it very much. heather