She Was A Fashion Bomb

Feet that should always be covered,

legs that need a shave bad,

she does not seem to be bothered,

thinks fashion is just a fad.



She might go to town with her boots on,

you never know what you'll see,

today she's the queen of fashion,

tomorrow she'll go down in infamy.



When you see her out on the town,

never make mention of the prom,

she'll make you live to regret it,

to think about the night.......



SHE WAS A FASHION BOMB.........

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I have to say thank you so much Tim for this title...... This was just a cool one to write..... thank you so much.... Renee'

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Robert  LaFountain's picture

Good job Renee'..The thought of this fashion bomb goin' to town in her yellow pumps :0)) just cracks me up. I love what you write and I am so proud of you for all the love and time that you devote to this site. God bvles and don't despair. There WILL be an end to the unread poems as long as there are a few of us willing to plug away at seeing that each and every poem that gets posted here DOES get read and critiqued. Luv ya. Goldeneagle

Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee And.... this was pretty cool to read as well! I liked it alot! Thanks for letting me know about your new one... I always look forward to reading new posts from you. Cya and have a nice day :) Roz

Alyson Mays's picture

Dear Renee, Another superb poem ma belle! This really made me think of someone I know! LOL Love, aly

Rachelle Wiegand's picture

This one is neat, Renee' Reminded me of the commercials that they were airing for the VH1 fashion awards with Gazelle. It was funny! Good title, Tim! Good job, Renee'

Tim Marshall's picture

I REALLY LIKE HOW YOU CHOSE THE SCENE ON THIS YOURE READY A+ FROM ME L&P