THE OLD ROMANTIC COUPLE

He met her when he was only a young a kid.

She never knew the number on his heart she did.

He thought of her beauty over the next few years.

Wondering just what it was about her blue eyes so clear.



He knew that he had to find her, make her his wife

spend the rest of their time living a long loving life.

He looks for her everywhere that he could possibly think.

Finally he finds her seems like she is there in a blink.



They fall into each others arms in love just like the first day.

"I have always loved you from the moment we met" was all she could say.

Her eyes still the blue he remembered, her skin so very supple.

This is just a story of what I call "THE OLD ROMANTIC COUPLE".

Author's Notes/Comments: 

HERE YOU ARE TIM.... JUST AS YOU REQUESTED... I HOPE THAT YOU LIKE THIS ONE AS MUCH AS I LIKED WRITTING IT... IT WAS A REAL JOY......

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Roz Turner's picture

Hi Renee I always get a twinge inside when I see an old couple still holding hands, etc.... Love is such a beauty, especially when it can be kept for so long. Great read. Roz

John Chapman's picture

I was told by a friend to read some of your work, and now I am glad I did...... I hope one day to find a love and know it right from the very first night. Thank You!

Tanya Foltz's picture

I hope to end up like this, reading my poetry, you know that I am totally in love.....I want just this.......Thank you!

Ali Saad's picture

a nice poetic image, Renee!a beutiful story in simple verses. Ali

Tim Marshall's picture

BOY DID IT TURN INTO A GOOD ONE GREAT JOB AND FUN READING ?ALMOST TO THE END,SIMPLE SLIP HER X YOU MEAN HE I'M TELLING YOU BECAUSE YOU WANT IT BEST, I MISSED YOU TONIGHT RENEE' RENEE'