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Emptyness
In the summer its all fun
and games
In the winter the sun is gone
and the emptyness takes control
grasping with an icy grip
to steal every positive memory
of the fun filled summer
In this broken heart
the emptyness is strong
The love that i found with you
makes the emptyness
whither away
as a shadow does at dawn
You know how much i love this one. So true. Good writing for your first love poem as you put it. Glad i inspired you, keep up the tremendous work. Soon we will write together and get published!!! :)
John