poem_243_Rhythmic_Rain

'Tis the rain!

For I am the pelting beat

That aids to

Your rhythmic feet!



Each pop 'n' lock

That you create

I'm the corresponding

Water mate



The pitter-patter of me

Falling to our destiny

Creating a rhymthic beauty

That only the ears can see



Blowing in the wind

That your fast moves make

As I douse your heated body

A moment's refresh I partake



For the rain that falls

Upon your moves

Is secretly myself

To aid in your grooves







Inspired by:/Dedicated to: Chane O'Brien Richmond

Created on: April 29, 2009 - 0140

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Afzal Shauq's picture

very sweet and professionally done this poem... sure I am not wrong if I say you are good poet with new subjects to express... hope you will like my expression of love based peace thoughts too( a friendly smile is the best weapon of war to fight with.... afzal shauq ) hope my this famous say is the only answer to your questions raising in your mind about the happiest collective life.... yeah... we belong to same family of Adam...and we are true cousins..indeed