PostPoems Be Artistic. Be Creative. Be Inspired!

( http://youtube.com/watch?v=_a7ZMiFHVVU <~ Watch this video first)



This comment is long,

I hope you will read,

Through all of it though,

For other I will exceed!



Free MacBook Air!

The JLCool declares!

A contest of the best,

For the Book to be theirs!



“To win you must comment!

Leave comments the best!”

Is what he declared

To begin the contest!



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Comment, comment!

Then comment some more!

To possibly win this

Core 2 Duo process-or?



Will it by Ryan

In his please of “pick me!”

Or the rude-commented

Doodlebugz33?



Who will you pick,

O, giver of the Air!

Of comments the best,

I implore you, declare!



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This wondrous treasure!

This glorious gift!

Unto whom will you,

Let ownership shift?



So many comments!

So little time!

So little words

For that words rhyme!



Many YouTubers want,

This wonderful thing,

You give unto us,

Through the video you bring.



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What be the best comment?

Out of so many already,

To give away that laptop,

Leaving so many unsteady!



You’re a clever one at that,

Mr. JLCoolProductions

To get more subscribers,

Through your wise instructions!



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So I add my praise!

To your glorious scheme

To get more viewers

And subscriber regime!



The time ticks away,

As comments roll on.

Eager people wait,

For a winner called upon.



“Three panda bears escalading,

Pretty freakin’ random!!! haha!”

Comments ClaireBear in cry!

She repeats per 2 weeks in try



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And youngman1928,

He’s clever in his demand.

For a loophole he has found,

In what you did command.



Then, there is Galloway.

Of words so attacking,

To your being a BSer!

For a comment he’s lacking.



To make the “best” comment,

It is not so easy to do.

So I can understand,

Why he’s downplaying you.



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Shoot, if I hadn’t skills,

Like dese right hur,

To make simple words

Rhyme in concur

I’d be hatin’ the playa

Fo’ makin’ it hard,

To get that prize,

That you wanna discard



But, no I don’t rag

On your ambiguous skill

To bring up your numbers

With a dream to fulfill



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And with all these comments,

It must be quite the task,

To read through them all,

So I’ll stop now and ask.



I have but one question to ask,

This free MacBook Air I see,

With MY wonderful comment,

Will it MacBook Air be given to me?







Inspired by: JLCoolProductions “Free MacBook Air GIVEAWAYY!!!”

Dedicated to: All the bitches that won’t win because of my comment!

Created on: June 14, 2008 – 0612