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Dear Diary
Folder:
old shit Dear diary,my little black notebook
Filled with the things I feel
Stop for a moment,take a look
It's me waiting to reveal
Secrets of sorrow
Totured from the inside out
Blood shed tomorrow
Living in this life I doubt
Feelings of anger,and of hate
Mixed with rage,Explode
Future holds my fate
Travel down this lonely road
Stand on the brink of life
Only inches from a fatal doom
Twist me on the edge of a knife
Shouldn't have left the room
Pay my creator
Thank him for all this pain
In which I cator
Alone in the acid rain
Dear diary,whom I confide in
Same shit everyday
Desperate change only to begin
Before I decide to stray
Locked in chains
From the world around
The feeling remains
In my heart,no sound
Heard from within me
Quiet as ever
To be set free
But,never
Journey life's trouble
Emotionless smile across my face
Figure I'm a life,on the double
Keep up this steady pace
Dear diary,always and forever
I'll tell you my all
Spill my problems,us together
No need to fall
Shed my skin
Those who talk shit
Stick with a pin
To the bottomless pit
Jab once,jab twice
Angel of death arrive
Roll this dice
So I can try to survive
To live tonight
Without bitter love
Nothings alright
Slapped with a glove
If only I cared
That I'm nothing now
A little girl,who's scared
To trust,How..?
Dear diary,provide the answers I need
To shut and lock this door
Keep those out who use pain to feed
Forever more....
I like ur choice of words, and the rythm that ur poem has. It flows so smoothly I couldn't stop reading and when it was over I sorta wish there was more. I also like your transitions from one thought ot the other and how they all connect.
This one gripped me also...ur a pretty talented writer. I hope u survive the pain u write about because this world needs writers like u who can peirce the hearts of people like u have peirced mine...indeed u can chage the world, (if u wanted to)