The Sparkling Blue Phantom

The origin of time had begun.

There was no sand,

no wind,

no sun.

No reason to come or be late.

No reason to love or to hate

only a passing thing.

In the morning time will gain nearer

In the Morning light will shine clearer

But there she stood in the rain,

crying and moaning in pain

not of pain that one finds in the rain

but a pain which no human can contain.

In her heart is where that sorrow remains
nobody on Earth to blame.

The rain gave her spirit when it came
lifting her soul like a crane.

But all she could do was sing.

There was no winter,
summer,
autumn

or spring.

Only the rain came to visit.

She found only herself as a critic.

So God went on to produce the Earth,

The rock,
and the stone

this mystical phantom was yet to be known.
on her own

she saw wars,...men caste into bone

Though with time she felt no longer alone
so she claimed and named the rain as her own

"My brother, My sisters we are not living nor dead

we live here only to breed our own dread.

The Time Is Of Hand!

To Make Our Great Stand!

To Show The World Our Everlasting Plan!"

So she took her great leap

into the enduring keep

of the nation of man.

Her very demand

to take her great stand
with the rain at her command.

But found she could not make her great leap

into the enduring keep

of the nation of man

The rain had become her.

Her muscles they..

simply could not expand.

Doomed to her very own ransom...

to never be known...

as the Sparkling Blue Phantom

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this during seventh grade based on a dream.
Thursday, March 22nd 2007

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Elfy's picture

I love it! Its really good,

I love it! Its really good, Your amazing at pulling the readers into the poems, the storys, that you write. Your dreams sound like dreams, Id love to visit, and never leave and enter the real world again lol. They sound protecting and enchanting like a fairy tale. hmmm. lol
Keep write, they are awsome.
:)


-Elfy*

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thanks i really appreciate

thanks i really appreciate that. Its strange too cause I actually barely dream anymore, at least not as much as I used to. I actually started writing a novel a few years ago, inspired by this dream but I have not picked up on it in months Lol


 

Ascesa e rialzarsi fino a quando gli agnelli diventano leoni

Rise and Rise again until Lambs become lions

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And you have the cheek to say

And you have the cheek to say you can't do rhymed poetry. Well this is ryhmed and its bloody good stuff, excuse my french.


I'm sorry i wasn't who you thought i was. F**k it, i'm sorry i wasn't who i thought i was.
...I bought the heartbreak hotel on my own with no investors, closed it down and opened the F**k you, get over it bed and breakfast