Like Ash in Wind

I feel split,
dispersed
like ash in wind:
a mound once formed,
now fragmented over the earth.

Grounded,
like so many others before,
and confounded
at what it shall birth.

 

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SSmoothie's picture

Ahhh! This is great! Yes well

Ahhh! This is great! Yes well said the confusion before the rise... A Phoenix in waiting... So uncertain till wings spread the ashes and fly! Hugss


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grahf's picture

Thank you as always,

Thank you as always, SSmoothie.

Morningglory's picture

Rising from ashes she rose

Rising from ashes
she rose from her grave
and found that she was really brave

she spread her wings and looked to the sky
with a couple of flutters she started to fly.


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grahf's picture

None of my poems have ever

None of my poems have ever been commented on with other poems. Thank you, it is lovely!

Morningglory's picture

Really? Glad to be the

Really? Glad to be the first... and glad you like!! Your poem inspired (or "birthed") it... :)


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