Adding progress to the process


Time flows
but the mechanics of each hour
remain steadfast.
So a future is a bit like
reliving the past.


       A song on loop
       reveals nuances
       once unheard,
       and birds
       tweak their flight-paths
       a tad more efficient
       each Winter.


I wonder
if an end-goal exists
or if our blunders
are intentional
to add
progress to the process.


       And should this approach
       remain unfettered?
       Is it better
       to craft compelling grammar
       or to omit a leter
       then fix the spelling?



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Jessica R.'s picture

How could you deprive me of such genius? Keep writing, if for no other reason than for the sake of poets like me that need something to aspire to. I expect more of this in 2008!