Should I Stay,or Should

August 2016

Should I Stay, or Should


As much, as.

I love, my brothers.

I miss, the real world !

And all, that it brings.

I miss, the warmth, of a ...... woman.

Of, conversations, with the living.

Of another's, touch.

When the fluttering, of wings,

Signal, it's my time......

Age, only being a number on a page.

Perhaps it's....

Time, to write a new chapter.

A new, beginning....?

I hope, I find, a new love...



I go.....

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Sassylass's picture

I hope

you find love too. a nice write!

forget age! no matters!

Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....



Nocnitsa's picture

Great message!  Loved the

Great message!  Loved the "age, only being a number on a page" although (if I may) "being" feels out of place... maybe just 'age is a number on a page'? Either way, great line!  I'll remember it...

"I have become a second generation cosmic being, I am conceived in the womb of nature, in my own mind... In the womb of the universe."