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Who's that Knocking at the
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November 2015 Who's that Knocking at the
Gates of Hell ?
Bring it on,for
I've tasted kisses....
Far sweeter, than wine.
I seen eyes that sparkled.
More brightly, than any star!
I've smelled loves scent....
in the early morning air.
Memories, more tangible, than
Mere dreams !
Of sight, and sound,and touch.
A love,
that consumed..... so, much.
Now lays spent.
At, deaths
Door
Giajl © Jim Love
Exquisite
I love the emotion and passion in this writing. It feeds off a good pint of energy and I totally feel it. Being only 16 you probably do not think I know what I am talking about, however oh yes sir I do. I am in highschool and have to write essays,poetry,etc. I've written one like you have in this one. I could say I may be able to take tips from you on how to write. You seem like your older. Would you be willing to message me any tips?
You've gotta pass hell to get to heaven..
Writing
My writing just happens.
i don't consciously set out to sit down and
write a piece about something.
words just happen.
.............,
makes the line longer
write from truth, what you feel what you see where you've been.
Paratrooper's don't die........ they go to Hell and regroup!!!