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Lessons Learned My world was torn in half
When your meteor eyes
Crashed into its surface.
Your fiery vision meant to
Destroy me when you
Entered my atmosphere.
Your flight path aimed
For my heart and created
A crater in my confidence.
I love your use of metaphor in this, though a short poem it is, it is still effective. This poem never answers the obvious question- who is that person who wrecked your confidence? But it doesn't ruin the poem even if it ends on an evocative note. I did enjoying reading it and that's the important part. Never bore the reader. I wasn't bored. Thanks for posting a cool poem!