Construction of the World (Rewrite)

Folder: 
Spiritual

Creation began with the

foundation being laid down~

the world placed on the axis

where it would not come loose.



Then, the Builder carefully

put up the support beams:

the rafters are the rainclouds

for they frame the atmosphere.



But the roof would never

cave in like it once did

when He flooded the earth

and all iniquity washed away.



The stars act as window

curtains, concealing that

which is unexplainable to

our minute understanding.



But if we wait awhile the

doors swing open allowing

the winds of wisdom to enter

if we will unlock our hearts.



When we let the Architect

occupy our souls, let Him dwell

in the corridors of our mind,

light comes into every room.

Rewrite 2012

Creation began with the
foundation being laid down~
the world placed on the axis
where it would not come loose.

Then, the Builder carefully
put up the support beams:
the rafters are the rainclouds
for they frame the atmosphere.

But the roof would never
cave in like it once did
when He flooded the earth
and all iniquity was washed away.

The stars act as window curtains,
concealing that which is unexplainable
to our minute understanding.

But if we wait awhile
the doors swing open allowing
the winds of wisdom to enter
if we will unlock our hearts.

When we let the Architect
occupy our souls, let Him
dwell in the corridors of our mind,
light comes into every room.

View ghostwriter_1900's Full Portfolio
Afzal Shauq's picture

The stars act as window
curtains, concealing that
which is unexplainable to
our minute understanding.

hmm look at this stanza of your's .soo realistic, eaningful and based the truth.. and the whole poem about the earth construction and how it became into exostence? and the reality.. hey maing me inspired a lot and really respect your holly and spritual ideas..