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Look how I can
Cough up these hairballs of poetic eloquence
And make you gag on my ingenious cleverness.

You'll munch on
My mumblings until you choke on my chatter
As you wonder how I spewed such savory musings.  

It's just that
I'm so skilled at tickling your taste buds
With just a sampling of my metaphoric mastery.

You're in awe  
As I regurgitate the same words over and over
And still serve up such reverential ramblings.

You lick your lips
As you await the next time I'll dish out more of
This figurative brilliance on which to masticate.

Please, don't forget
To clean up the slobber you left on the floor
When you're done reveling in what I just spit up.

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Look how I can cough up
these hairballs of poetic eloquence
and make you gag on my ingenious cleverness.

You'll munch on my mumblings
until you choke on my chatter
as you wonder how I spewed such savory musings.

It's just that I'm so skilled
at tickling your taste buds
with just a sampling of my metaphoric mastery.

You're in awe as I regurgitate
the same words over and over
and still serve up such reverential ramblings.

You lick your lips as you await
the next time I'll dish out more of
this figurative brilliance on which to masticate.

Please, don't forget to clean up
the slobber you left on the floor
when you're done reveling in what I just spit up.

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Afzal Shauq's picture

sweeet jessica
its really a verrrrrry good pome..like it ..they way you do is perfect....

Alex Weavers's picture

Bryan, it's seriously creepy how much you do on this site.

I enjoyed this poem, it's deliciously disgusting, and I wonder, could it even be reflecting on itself?

Bryan Adam Tomimbang's picture

LOL! Yum, so disgustingly delicous your poem was! All those words crumble in my mouth only in the end to become bile that I vomited to the floor! A truthfully excellent poem. Really creative. Great job! Keep it up!