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The Incredible Lightness of Being
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Existential The incredible lightness of
Being
Alive
And feeling the breath from inside
Flow out
Flow in
The incredible lightness of
Floating
Flying
Seeing through the eyes of angels
Loving
Knowing
The incredible lightness of
Freedom
At peace
Existing in a world of light
Resting
Dreaming
The incredible lightness of
Knowledge
Wisdom
The rights to understand all things
To grow
With time
The incredible lightness of
Oneness
The soul
To stare at the wonders of God
In mind
And heart
The incredible lightness of
Laughter
Friendship
You and me together in life
Today
Always
04/24/02
Amy Riberdy
This is such a lovely, well written poem. I like how your lines are light like your title and image of an angel or at that's why I was imagining. It gave a wonderful feeling and I can't thank you enough for it. God bless you and take care until we speak again.
Amy..... this is such a beautiful piece of writing.....
I love the dreamy nature of this ....... as always your talented pen has captured a wonderful piece...... thanks for the heads up on this ...... I am never dissappointed when I read your work.......
The title reminds me of this movie of the same name, amy.
Smilesz... is that the same referral ?
This poem has a very calm and meditative quality to it...like a persona reflecting on the intrinsic matters of the world.
Smilesz.
interesting work, amy...
An excellent story which inspired a wonderful poem. I do like this and I like the form you chose to use...it really seems to fit the poem.
Kris
A lovely poem of lightness and beauty Amy.
Very nicely written.
Thanks for alerting me to its posting.
F. Salphire
Ah yes, the incredible being of light is a beautiful thing and this seems to be a truly inspirational piece to the light within. And the lightness it does ease the journey. It is yet another great piece of work that demonstrates your penmanship (penpersonship?). Although I would not always call the gaining of certain knowledge a lightness.
Well done Amy,
Richard.Elliott.
The reocurring meaningfulness
of oneness and loving friendship
within the lines of this piece,
is inspiring and welcoming.
And of course,
the following line
is moving;
"To stare at the
wonders of God
In mind
And heart..."
I do cherish this piece indeed!
Ugonna