Cold and Empty

Cold and Empty

 

When you left, you left a cold and empty soul in the trail.

You left me feel like

I was going to going to empty again.

My heart turned cold

and it was empty

 because of the pain that you leaving did.

I am cold empty shell full of pain.

When you left, you left a cold and empty soul

and now it is full of pain from where I love you.

When you left you left me cold

and feeling alone.

-Gene Conner

May 17, 2010 

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sanctus's picture

some grammar issues. also,

some grammar issues. also, rather trite