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with no fire
on the beach next to the bridge
the sun is gone, but the sky
is bright with stars
center stage is the big dipper
it's almost as if
i could make that up
my breath floats in
the flashlight beam
i wonder if the quiet
is for me
if the last ice age
left this rock on this beach
for me to sit and write
and to pine for you
like every conifer
along the shore
You're wording is good. It paints a scene in my head almost like from a book or movie. I especially like the last three stanzas.
A beautiful poem; but the last two stanzas are incredibly brilliant!
Starward