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Gone
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Pain I give up.
You've taken my pride.
My joy.
My confidence.
But no more.
No more.
I'm going.
You've sent me away.
With your arrogance.
And ignorance.
And abuse.
I'm blue and purple.
Everywhere.
At first it was small.
So I let it go.
But I've had enough.
I give up.
I'm going.
No more.
nicely done!:) I like the
nicely done!:) I like the few words and periods, makes it a candid statement that resonates. keep up the good work, you've got an interesting style.
Thank you!
Thank you! I hope you keep reading my poems! And everyone that reads my poems, I just wanted to say there's gonna be a second part to 'What if?'
A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)
Aspiring
Keep writing... it bring a sense of accomplishment to me. and posting stuff here makes me feel heard. just remember that your not alone. keep on pushing. <3
-- Jordan <3
Thank you.
Thank you. Sometimes I think that even though I never met you guys, you are the most supportive people on the earth. Thanks again!
A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)
Well written
This is well written and I can relate on more levels than I would like. Just keep writing it out that's how I got and am still getting through.
I'll make sure I do that
I'll make sure I do that
A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)