Trust is priceless

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I think I'm going crazy.
I'm pulling my hair out,
And screaming at silly things.
I'm ignoring my loved ones,
And being cruel to them.

Why?

Is it him?
Or is it her?
I thought I could trust her.
I thought wrong.

Trust is like an eraser.
Every time you make a mistake,
It gets smaller.
And she just made the final mistake.

I can't take it anymore!
You took him from me.
You knew he was mine,
But that didn't stop you.

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Kikaykit's picture

you have a gift

You have a gift to put togeether ur emotions in poem..use the emotions and write more... Time heals. :)


Kiks

RedAsBlood's picture

Time doesn't help. It's been

Time doesn't help. It's been 5 years. I've liked this guy since I first saw him. It's harder than it seems.


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)

ADAPT's picture

I know way too much about

I know way too much about this situation. My best friend at the time introduced me to a girl he knew. I started dating this girl. The girl cheated on me with this so called best friend in my own house. On top of this I let him borrow my xbox and hd tv close to 1200 dollars in stuff I purchased myself. well. I confronted him with much anger. I lost the girl and the so called friend and he sold my xbox and tv. then this now ex girlfriend is now dating another close friend of mine. Moral of the story. Dont trust anyone with your heart or stuff. It will never be taken care of the way you take care of it. let alone seen again.


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I am so sorry. I am only

I am so sorry. I am only dealing with half of what your dealing with. Ive learnt that the heart heals with time so our only option is to move on. Thanks for reading!!


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)

SSmoothie's picture

It's quite good! I love a

It's quite good! I love a good old cliche every now and then, eraser... Trust is an iffy thing, and people are human, it's always a risk. Nice write. Really no one can take someone from any one,,, people are free to do as they please. Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Thanks! Glad its likeable!

Thanks! Glad its likeable!


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)

Gonebutnotforgotten's picture

I can relate to this

When someone you thought you can trust stabs you in the back, and laughs over your lifeless body...... When that person takes the one you long for... I understand.

RedAsBlood's picture

Its hard losing not just one

Its hard losing not just one but two people you used to care about. Thanks for liking it!


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)

Morningglory's picture

I think you're doing a great

I think you're doing a great job. Keep up the good work. Sort you'be gone though this though. Sounds heartbreaking.


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RedAsBlood's picture

It is really heartbreaking. I

It is really heartbreaking. I write from experience and most of feelings come grom sadness or hatred. Thanks for your support!


A heart is like a puzzle. It's hard to put together when the pieces are broken and missing.
RedAsBlood :)