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Flowing Tears

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Rain falls hard and fast

Filling meandering paths

Tears streak rocky face

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Can't remember when written. The inspiration came from a mountain leg of a cross country bus trip. (I keep changing the last line.)
REWRITE 9/5/06

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 4:33pm
©18 August 2006 - 10:55pm — fliptop
6 October 2006 - 3:49pm — S74rw4rd
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Excellent!

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