Promises

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To him once, a whole world unseen

And one unheard to her;

Yet somehow, they touched by fate

Their worlds changed forever.

Together they rose and fell,

As their worlds laughed and wept.

For Promises, not to be broken

Were always meant to be kept.

 

 

Ages later, once darkness fell

And deafening silence arose...

Scattered petals mattered no more,

Teardrops in their tracks, froze.

Separated, they wept and fell,

And without a word, they left

For Promises were meant to be broken

Never meant to be kept.

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gummifroggie's picture

Awesome job!

Wow, I love it !

Daniel-59's picture

Just droped in to say . I

Just droped in to say . I like the hell out of it , And I don't like anything ! lol

Damn Good indeed !


Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

Beavis's picture

"Scattered petals mattered no

"Scattered petals mattered no more,"

love the poem, especially the way the time frame feels so ambiguous, to me at least. Adds another element ;-)

bishu's picture

Oh Mayukh I'm very happy to see this poem of yours on the Fav Li

Oh Mayukh I'm very happy to see this poem of yours on the Fav List.Congratulations !!!  ~Very best wishes for a happy Durga Puja~ Smile


©bishu 

 

signet's picture

I'm almost scared.. this poem

I'm almost scared.. this poem resonated with one I wrote.  

It's called roses. I'm almost worried that.. well I need to let you read it. 


Make me remember my dreams

Stardust's picture

haha... nice co-incidence

haha... nice co-incidence there :)

nothing to be worried abt really :) maybe we just wrote from the same mindset, that's why. hopefully we can collaborate in d future :D

n sure, i'll read it. is it on pp yet??

not_an_addict's picture

Very well written. Loved

Very well written. Loved this. Post some more.


please read my poems, and enjoy the real-life drama that is my life!

Stardust's picture

will do. thanx 4 d

will do. thanx 4 d appreciation :)