WRITTING SOMETHING DIFFERANT

Why can't I write about love and fairytale,
Blooms and nightengales
Is something wrong with my head
all i write about is hopes of being dead
I try to let the words flow from hope
but nothing i write comes close
Lemondrops, sugarplums , or rainbows
Nothing about pretty bubbles to blow
Am I that messed up in the head
can I untwin one single happy thread
or am I stuck in hopelessness
fighting this battle loosing my head
Come on give me some kind of cheer to spread
let my words make a smile
and get out of this darkness for a while
just the same write over and over
let me something even about grover

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Failed Miserably

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SoulShadow's picture

U are who u a and u wear ur

U are who u a and u wear ur skin well

poet610's picture

fighting this battle loosing my head

Hi hun,
I often had the same feelings, many times. the only time i seem to write or write any thing good is when i'm depressed or writing about death or pain.
I guess we all have our ink. some of us can mix it better then others if that makes in sense.
Keep penning
610

SSmoothie's picture

I think it's a smashing success!

I loved this even 'Super Grover' has his bad days! Well written sincere personal and totally relatable! HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

facethetruth2b's picture

Why Thank You very much....In

Why Thank You very much....In my worst Elvis Voice I can pull off......


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

SSmoothie's picture

Lol! PSML

Excited screams chaos hysteria 'Elvis has left the building...!' :'D


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

hurtandlost's picture

yes, i feel the same.

yes, i feel the same. remember that you are making others smile by sharing your gut and it shines throughout your poems. thank you for sharing this poem!:)

twincities's picture

I feel the same way. My poems

I feel the same way. My poems are heart felt, but far from any thing sweet.


Moncies A. Franco

facethetruth2b's picture

Atleast I am not alone..I

Atleast I am not alone..I will be sure to read yours...


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......