60 sec.

60 seconds is all yo give me,
what can I wrrite in 60 seconds lets see,
I am waking up drinking my coffee,
Mind still not awake ,
More sips I need to take ,
To wake my mind, and open my eyes ,
I willl give this 60 second poem a try .

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I tried the 60 second poem that SSmoothie asked , it is not as good as his/hers but I tried ....

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MrsLivingston©'s picture

Lol Nice ;)

Lol Nice ;)


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SSmoothie's picture

Haha! That's pretty awsome

Haha! That's pretty awsome for half awake! What a superstar! ;) love it thanks! Btw you got me with the coffee! I love my cuppa!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

facethetruth2b's picture

Thanks a Bunch ...

This is my first place to go while i drink my coffee instead of the paper I like to read poems ...thanks for the challenge up for more if you have ......


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......

SSmoothie's picture

You're awesome!

Ha ha me too! Seriously!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am