languishing

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quatrains

i languished over my beloved's fragmentation

as my impression of her dissolved;

her memory, a fractured amalgamation,

an enigmatic riddle tearfully unsolved.

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The contours of the lines,

The contours of the lines, and the rhyme scheme, very powerfully underscore the impact and the importance of the emotional experience that inspired the poem.


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