first attempt at freeverse

sucked into this whirlpool of concienceness

wishing i could go back to sleep and dream

living in all of my screwed up confusion

wanting to find a better third world

waiting for life to end in eternity

sucking the breath from the depths of my soul

hating all the stupidity that reeks havok ont his life

waiting for my vigilant struggle to end

Author's Notes/Comments: 

name says it all

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I like it!!!