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a guy that treats me right

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All im asking for is a guy in my life,

that'll comfort me and treat me right,

All im asking for is a guy to be there,

when everythings wrong and i cannot bare.

All im asking for is a guy to like me for who i am,

instead of wishing that i was.....

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watch out guy's!

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©29 February 2004 - 4:58pm — emzy_baby
11 June 2004 - 3:44pm — DJ Wood (not verified)
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Sometimes the shorter the poem the more meaningfull, powerfull delivery. well done.
DJ

15 March 2004 - 4:22pm — Adam Herdman (not verified)
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Short but straight to the point. Nicely done! Hopefully you'll find that guy someday :)! PD17 Out...

22 March 2004 - 5:39pm — eyeq
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This was short and too the point. The simplicity was a great way to bring home such a strong message.