As I was gazing at the sullen night,
Happiness had faded from my sight.
Deep emotions, as cold as ice,
Tears slowly flowed from my eyes.
The stars and the moon stared down at me,
As if sharing some light of sympathy;
Watching each crystal drop as I cry,
Silhouetted against the midnight sky.
Deep in the midst of darkness, I hide,
While the fog of comfort and pain collide.
Wow. I like this! It's very powerful and it lets you see what you're feeling when you write this. I like the way you write! Very cool. I'm going to read more. PEACE!