Demons Revenge ( Rated R)

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Teenage Chronicals

Why don't you close your eyes

This is going to be one hell of a night

I am scarey and i am done

Since you like me i won't be the one



Broke my heart and left the whole world to see

i just don't think i like to dream

i follow my nightmares to broken doors

i don't ever wanna see your face no more





I'm so breathless days i take

when will i figure out i made a mistake

I been hurting Filled with pain

But i'm sad and i'm still insane

I got the fucking question

Ask the fucking question



See the eyes of the distance sun

No one to laugh and no one to run

Eyes are bloody Blood is red

I'm a sinister with a dred



I'll take your soul

Make it mine

I'll slit your throat

Thats what i called life



all the chances that you take will never ever make you the way you will see the light

I'll take you back  back to the place that was doing just fine

Throught the time it took to the day i looked to see you were the one for me



I got sinsters head

Inside me dead

I'm just stupid fucked up in the head

Don't you dare take what is bringing you down

look at my face do i look like a clown

Give me your soul and I['ll show you how



I'm a little bit  fucking crazy yeah yeah yeah yeah

you don't wanna fuck with me

I'm a little bit crazy yeah yeah yeah



i can turn over and I be nice

i can dream of heaven i can think twice

i can take you over and show you everything you said to me

and how you wanted me to speak will bring you down



Leave the demons alone  It;s your only savior

Just pull the trigger end this demon stealing sinister head

Take me down to the dead

We can keep it real i don't want to steal

Demons of this life   ask the question

Demons come out and cry

DI DIE DIE DIE



DIE  DIE DIE DIE DIE DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!WHOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA FUCK YOU FUCK YOU.FUCK YOU!!!!!!!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This was a feeling i had and it's gone because i found my savoir

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Essence Scott's picture

i am at a loss for words on how to write this critique...i can say that it's really good...and it is...i love the second stanza/verse...its how i felt after sean, though im not sure if my nightmares follow me to brokn doors....i love this so much..