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emotions on paper

Beauty abounds in you,

Love is all around you,

Foolish is he who loses you,

But worth their weight in gold,

Are the memories i still hold of you.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

It's Crystal Clear....

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onemanwar's picture

That, my friend, has to be the one thing that girls would only dream of hearing. Short, yet sweet, and you didn't force the rhyme. It is the best poem I have ever read. I hope the person this is written for can only feel the same.

~.:.I Hope You Choke When You Swallow Your Pride.:.~