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A passion flames inside my heart,
I yearn for your invitation
Into your heart, inside your kiss
where we befall to temptation.
My heart is aching
Knowing what it is worth,
To fight a battle
Despite what others think.
The rythym of your kiss
takes over me,
The thought of your smile
devours me
They can try, with all their mite
to tear us apart,
to win the fight.
But nothing can stop us...
a love so deep..a passion so binding,
that I'm determined to keep.
A passion dwells inside my heart,
I burn for your sensations.
Deeper then the physical thought,
our love needs no explainations.
Theresa,
Maybe I should rephrase my previous comment as I would find it undsireable to create a misrepresentation of my intelligence.
"After reading this poem it is my personal opinion that this poem posseses the equalivant importance to an enormous quantity of fecal matter. I am unable to determine how a human being can create a poem that is so horrible."
I also believe that it is very hyppocritical for a person to accuse another of being illiterate when they themselves have difficulty spelling simple words (e.g. "Buh bye", "jeeze") and maintaining unfragmented sentences.
Thank-you,
J
J, jeez what are you illiterate? I think this poem is brilliant, both the wording and rythem. I think it is hilarious how you post that this is the "shitiest poem" you have ever read, and yet this is your eloquent phrasing. If one does not have the intelligence to have proper descriptive prowess they should not attemt the same. Nor should they critique those who do. Buh bye
Theresa
This is the shittiest poem i've ever read. I don't know how somebody can write such a crappy poem.