Old Poems

Born a fallen angel right from the start
Trying to do good but it always falls apart

It appears that she is marked
The wound is fiercly deep
Yet no sign of penetration within her farthest reach

The emotional scars are too much to bare
All this turmoil seems unfair

What she has succumbed to, noone will ever know
All she has is memories and a heart so full of woe

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Thanks for the words of

Thanks for the words of encouragement :)

The only real failure in life is not to be true to the best one knows.--Buddha

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Just Writing To Say I Thought This Poem Was Truly Awesome.
I Think You Should Keep Up The Good Work, I Really Liked Your Writing Style Aswell.