Lost My Mind

I have lost my mind
why have I felt so lonely and yearned for attention only
to end up so lost
so eager to find company
that reflects my own feelings back to me
I need a mirror
the only sign of reflection just pulls me deeper into
the mind I can't comprehend
I just look into my mind and deeper and deeper
im seeping in
like someone with my own problem will shed some light
by me looking at them im not so crazy as I thought
but until then
im looking into this mirror trying to find my mind
just to see a continuous wonder
looking so deep
I become deeper
so engulfed this world to come back to is
disappointing
living in a dimension where maybe
just maybe
I could find all the answers

~Surreal

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nightlight1220's picture

Ditto Ssmoothie!▶▶▶▶▶▶▶▶

Ditto Ssmoothie!

▶▶▶▶▶▶▶▶I would add..."no, you haven't lost your mind at all."


...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

SSmoothie's picture

YES i WILL ADD THAT :"NO YOU

YES i WILL ADD THAT :"NO YOU HAVENT LOST YOUR MIND AT ALL!" HUGSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

SSmoothie's picture

great piece! for me I have

great piece! for me I have found satisfaction and peace in not looking for anyones approval but the mighty Lord/Lordess above. all is right with me. and I find that I am a stronger stranger than a feeble familiar friend. ;) that means I am who I chose to be at any moment. and in that moment totally honest about who I am to myself.


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."